无老师iBT新托福作文巨讲堂(2015年12月号)
无老师优秀范例:Moreover, parents are more experienced. When dealing with some daily problems, and they can aid adult children to overcome difficulties. Imaging there is a young couple, who do not have any experience of raising an infant. They are annoyed by the baby's crying in the mid-night and baby’s rejection to food as well. That is exactly the condition that their parents can help. Parents can give them detailed suggestions about how to comfort the baby, and also teach them how to distinguish if the baby is hungry or feel uncomfortable. Asking parents to babysit the kids can be also a good choice for office workers. 无老师优秀翻译:不仅如此,父母们的经验更加丰富。当处理日常事务时,他们可以帮助青年人来克服问题。想象一下,一对年轻夫妇,他们在抚养孩子上没有太多经验。他们对孩子在午夜的苦恼烦恼不已,孩子不愿意吃东西也把他们都征服了。这种情况恰好就需要父母的帮助。父母们可以提供非常具有可操作性的建议,在如何安抚小孩,和教他们如何分辨小孩是感觉到饿了,还是感觉不舒服。请父母来照顾小孩对于上班一族来说是个很好的选择。 无老师平庸范例:Moreover, parents have more experience. When dealing with the everyday work, they can help the young adults to deal with problems. You can imagine this, the young parents do not have much experience. They are very bothered by the baby’s cry in the night, and they are bothered by the baby’s dislike of eating. This just need parents’ help. Parents could offer very useful suggestion in how to comfort the baby, and help them in how to find that if the baby was hungry or not good. So, it is a good choice to invite the parents to look after the baby. 无老师精析:无老师每一次的作文巨讲堂,都是找满分作文,来将其作为原稿,然后翻译出中文译本,一对一的直接翻译。然后再根据中文译本写出平庸范例,力求平庸范例写的越烂越好,尽可能模仿出低水平的考友们的真实状态,因此里面会有很多中式英语,语法错误以及诡异的表达。当然也因为整体是按照优秀范例的中文译本翻译过来的,因此难免有些内容与优秀范例十分的相似。 首先第一句,优秀范例:Moreover, parents are more experienced.对比平庸范例Moreover, parents have more experience.在这里貌似平庸范例用到了experience的名词词性,但是实际上,因为平庸范例的谓语have在这种语境下用的不地道,因此,其实还是优秀范例更胜一筹。