无老师满分范例：Another thing to be worried about the statement is that, if actually carried out, both teachers and students would be cast into the irrational pursuit for performance thus results in serious problems. For example, a teacher evaluated in this way is immediately forced to make the decision: to push her class toward the best performance or at least better than the worst-performing class, and show preference to students who perform well. Such measures might be incentives for a better grade, but the teacher and the students would lose their original motivation in schooling as performance becomes the one and only purpose. Also, consequent competition among students would place heavy pressure on every student, and the ones who do not perform well would be neglected by the teacher and fall into upset. Considering all the disastrous effect such measure could incur, it is obvious that teachers should not be paid on the basis of students' performance.
无老师优秀中文翻译：另外一个关于这个想法需要担心的就是，如果真的实行的话，老师和学生都将会进入一个非理性的对于表现的追求，因此会导致很严重的问题。比如，一个老师以这种方式评价的话，会立即被迫做出这样的决定：督促自己的班级尽力的去表现，或者比表现最差的班级好一点，而且更喜欢那些表现很好的学生。这样的衡量的方式或许会成为追求更高的分数的推手，但是老师和学生都失去了上学的最原始的动机，当表现成为一个同时也是唯一的动机的时候。同样的，接下来的学生间的竞争将会对每个学生都带来巨大的压力，那些表现的不够好的学生将会被老师所忽略，以至于进入到心烦意乱的状态。考虑到这样的评测方式可能带来的灾难性的效果，很显然老师不应该根据学生的表现而决定自己的收入。
无老师平庸范例：Another concern that we should pay attention to this idea is that, if we really do this, teachers and students would irrationally look for the performance. It would lead to serious problem. For example, if we judge teacher in this way, he would at once have to make a decision: they his best to make his class perform well, or just perform a little better than other classes. And he may like the best performance student. The method of judgment may make everyone want the higher score, but students and teachers may lose the first purpose that they go to school, while performance become the only one purpose. Similarly, the competition in the students will give each student a lot of pressure, and the students who are not good enough will be ignored by the teachers, and they may be very sad. When we find that the method of judgement may lead to disaster, it is obvious that teachers should not be paid by their students' performance.
其实高分作文和平庸作文的差别在哪里呢？想来想去，总是觉得很难用一个简单的词来进行描述，如果我们将其模糊化的话，或许高分作文与平庸作文的差别就在于，我们平庸的作文总是可以逐字的翻译成中文，但是高分作文总是很地道的浑然天成吧。比如说今天的高分作文，我们就会发现，原来某些含义，是有固定的词来表达的，但是当我们自己写的时候，总是用一些特别大众化的词，就显得我们的作文特别的“小学生”。我们与高分作文的差别，就好似“奶奶有了白头发”与“我知道凡是美丽的总不肯，也不会为谁停留”之间的差别吧。
首先第一句优秀范例Another thing to be worried about the statement is that, if actually carried out, both teachers and students would be cast into the irrational pursuit for performance thus results in serious problems.对比平庸范例：Another concern that we should pay attention to this idea is that,if we really do this, teachers and students would irrationally look for the performance. It would lead to serious problem.显然在一开始，优秀范例的Another thing to be worried about the statement is that和平庸范例的Another concern that we should pay attention to this idea is that两者平分秋色。但是接下来，显然优秀范例的carried out比平庸范例的do this的敷衍准确很多。接下来优秀范例的be cast into与irrational pursuit则是让我们感叹，原来还可以这样写的！至于最后的优秀范例的results in与平庸范例的lead to其实都还好，只是显然平庸范例最后的It would lead to serious problem.又是新起一句，显得连贯性不是很好。
接下来优秀范例发大招了！优秀范例：For example, a teacher evaluated in this way is immediately forced to make the decision: to push her class toward the best performance or at least better than the worst-performing class, and show preference to students who perform well.对比平庸范例For example, if we judge teacher in this way, he would at once have to make a decision: they his best to make his class perform well, or just perform a little better than other classes. And he may like the best performance student.首先优秀范例的evaluate这个词表示“评价”用的很准确，不像平庸范例就使用judge一个词用到底。而且我们向后看还会发现原来evaluate竟然还不是本句话的谓语，而仅仅是一个后置定语来修饰主语，顿觉原作者的凶悍！然后优秀范例接下来的immediately与be forced to一个表示时间的短暂，一个表示教师的无奈，画面感跃然纸上！然后优秀范例的push好像平淡无奇，但是对比平庸范例的make，我们顿时觉得，优秀范例的push将一个抽象的概念“使”转化为画面感很强的“推”，还真的有一点点“僧敲月下门”的感觉。然后再接下来优秀范例的at least好像是一退，但是后面的worst-performing表示“表现最差的班级”，显然比平庸范例的“other classes”准确得多，同时也显示出“教师”的无奈。而且最后原作者也没有简单的用like这样的泛泛的词，而是用了prefer这样的词，不仅如此还用了其的名词词性show preference to，顿时让我们觉得非常的书面化！
第三句，优秀范例Such measures might be incentives for a better grade, but the teacher and the students would lose their original motivation in schooling as performance becomes the one and only purpose.对比平庸范例The method of judgment may make everyone want the higher score, but students and teachers may lose the first purpose that they go to school, while performance become the only one purpose.优秀范例先用了一个such，沟通起了本句话与前面内容的逻辑，然后接下来又秀出一个measure对应前面的evaluate，环环相扣！漂亮！对比平庸范例的method of judgment就显得很臃肿了。然后接下来，优秀范例连出大招！be incentives for，original motivation，as performance becomes the one and only purpose一下就征服了阅卷的老师！完胜！如果不觉得很霸气的话，就对比一下平庸范例的make everyone want，first purpose和only one purpose，显然平庸范例是典型的拼凑而成！而优秀范例是实打实的浑然天成！我们就感觉，英语就该像优秀范例这么说，而平庸范例只是在邯郸学步而已，而且学得还超级蹩脚！
倒数第二句，优秀范例Also, consequent competition among students would place heavy pressure on every student, and the ones who do not perform well would be neglected by the teacher and fall into upset.对比平庸范例Similarly, the competition in the students will give each student a lot of pressure, and the students who are not good enough will be ignored by the teachers, and they may be very sad.优秀范例一开始就又出杀招。consequent competition，很显然，consequent扎样的词，我们只能想到去用consequentially这一种用法，但是作者不仅用到了他的形容词词性，而且还带到了前文的班级间的比较，进而引申到本句话的学生间的比较。逻辑成绩的非常棒！但是平庸范例，干巴巴的Similarly, the competition就少了这种传承的感觉。然后接下来的优秀范例的be neglected by与平庸范例的be ignored by，其实都很优秀，不过差别在最后又出现了，优秀范例的fall into upset对比平庸范例的may be very sad，显然优秀范例的fall into给人陷入万丈深渊的感觉，然后以upset作底，就感觉万丈深渊底下又是百尺钉板，真的是一下将人打入冷宫！马上要记下来！反观平庸范例的may be very sad就好像是从婴儿嘴里说出来的一般，味同嚼蜡。
最后一句，优秀范例Considering all the disastrous effect such measure could incur, it is obvious that teachers should not be paid on the basis of students' performance.对比平庸范例When we find that the method of judgment may lead to disaster, it is obvious that teachers should not be paid by their students' performance.显然，优秀范例的disastrous effect写的很给力！因为我们平时也就写bad effect或许更高级一点negative effect，但是优秀范例竟然可以祭出disastrous这样的词来表示效果的负面程度，堪称“毁灭级”，令人啧啧称奇！真的是我们的阅读量太小了！然后还要恨恨的感叹一下incur这个词，以前都不认识，原来是“招致”的意思，顿觉原作者的霸气啊！最后优秀范例的on the basis of也是很令人汗颜，因为我们最经常写的也就是based on，而且还觉得很漂亮了，但是原来还有on the basis of这样的表达方式，真的是气煞周郎啊！
优秀的作文，一定是建立在多读优秀原文的基础上的！无老师作文巨讲堂，在2013年一定要更上一层楼啊！
其实高分作文和平庸作文的差别在哪里呢？想来想去，总是觉得很难用一个简单的词来进行描述，如果我们将其模糊化的话，或许高分作文与平庸作文的差别就在于，我们平庸的作文总是可以逐字的翻译成中文，但是高分作文总是很地道的浑然天成吧。比如说今天的高分作文，我们就会发现，原来某些含义，是有固定的词来表达的，但是当我们自己写的时候，总是用一些特别大众化的词，就显得我们的作文特别的“小学生”。我们与高分作文的差别，就好似“奶奶有了白头发”与“我知道凡是美丽的总不肯，也不会为谁停留”之间的差别吧。
首先第一句优秀范例Another thing to be worried about the statement is that, if actually carried out, both teachers and students would be cast into the irrational pursuit for performance thus results in serious problems.对比平庸范例：Another concern that we should pay attention to this idea is that,if we really do this, teachers and students would irrationally look for the performance. It would lead to serious problem.显然在一开始，优秀范例的Another thing to be worried about the statement is that和平庸范例的Another concern that we should pay attention to this idea is that两者平分秋色。但是接下来，显然优秀范例的carried out比平庸范例的do this的敷衍准确很多。接下来优秀范例的be cast into与irrational pursuit则是让我们感叹，原来还可以这样写的！至于最后的优秀范例的results in与平庸范例的lead to其实都还好，只是显然平庸范例最后的It would lead to serious problem.又是新起一句，显得连贯性不是很好。
接下来优秀范例发大招了！优秀范例：For example, a teacher evaluated in this way is immediately forced to make the decision: to push her class toward the best performance or at least better than the worst-performing class, and show preference to students who perform well.对比平庸范例For example, if we judge teacher in this way, he would at once have to make a decision: they his best to make his class perform well, or just perform a little better than other classes. And he may like the best performance student.首先优秀范例的evaluate这个词表示“评价”用的很准确，不像平庸范例就使用judge一个词用到底。而且我们向后看还会发现原来evaluate竟然还不是本句话的谓语，而仅仅是一个后置定语来修饰主语，顿觉原作者的凶悍！然后优秀范例接下来的immediately与be forced to一个表示时间的短暂，一个表示教师的无奈，画面感跃然纸上！然后优秀范例的push好像平淡无奇，但是对比平庸范例的make，我们顿时觉得，优秀范例的push将一个抽象的概念“使”转化为画面感很强的“推”，还真的有一点点“僧敲月下门”的感觉。然后再接下来优秀范例的at least好像是一退，但是后面的worst-performing表示“表现最差的班级”，显然比平庸范例的“other classes”准确得多，同时也显示出“教师”的无奈。而且最后原作者也没有简单的用like这样的泛泛的词，而是用了prefer这样的词，不仅如此还用了其的名词词性show preference to，顿时让我们觉得非常的书面化！
第三句，优秀范例Such measures might be incentives for a better grade, but the teacher and the students would lose their original motivation in schooling as performance becomes the one and only purpose.对比平庸范例The method of judgment may make everyone want the higher score, but students and teachers may lose the first purpose that they go to school, while performance become the only one purpose.优秀范例先用了一个such，沟通起了本句话与前面内容的逻辑，然后接下来又秀出一个measure对应前面的evaluate，环环相扣！漂亮！对比平庸范例的method of judgment就显得很臃肿了。然后接下来，优秀范例连出大招！be incentives for，original motivation，as performance becomes the one and only purpose一下就征服了阅卷的老师！完胜！如果不觉得很霸气的话，就对比一下平庸范例的make everyone want，first purpose和only one purpose，显然平庸范例是典型的拼凑而成！而优秀范例是实打实的浑然天成！我们就感觉，英语就该像优秀范例这么说，而平庸范例只是在邯郸学步而已，而且学得还超级蹩脚！
倒数第二句，优秀范例Also, consequent competition among students would place heavy pressure on every student, and the ones who do not perform well would be neglected by the teacher and fall into upset.对比平庸范例Similarly, the competition in the students will give each student a lot of pressure, and the students who are not good enough will be ignored by the teachers, and they may be very sad.优秀范例一开始就又出杀招。consequent competition，很显然，consequent扎样的词，我们只能想到去用consequentially这一种用法，但是作者不仅用到了他的形容词词性，而且还带到了前文的班级间的比较，进而引申到本句话的学生间的比较。逻辑成绩的非常棒！但是平庸范例，干巴巴的Similarly, the competition就少了这种传承的感觉。然后接下来的优秀范例的be neglected by与平庸范例的be ignored by，其实都很优秀，不过差别在最后又出现了，优秀范例的fall into upset对比平庸范例的may be very sad，显然优秀范例的fall into给人陷入万丈深渊的感觉，然后以upset作底，就感觉万丈深渊底下又是百尺钉板，真的是一下将人打入冷宫！马上要记下来！反观平庸范例的may be very sad就好像是从婴儿嘴里说出来的一般，味同嚼蜡。
最后一句，优秀范例Considering all the disastrous effect such measure could incur, it is obvious that teachers should not be paid on the basis of students' performance.对比平庸范例When we find that the method of judgment may lead to disaster, it is obvious that teachers should not be paid by their students' performance.显然，优秀范例的disastrous effect写的很给力！因为我们平时也就写bad effect或许更高级一点negative effect，但是优秀范例竟然可以祭出disastrous这样的词来表示效果的负面程度，堪称“毁灭级”，令人啧啧称奇！真的是我们的阅读量太小了！然后还要恨恨的感叹一下incur这个词，以前都不认识，原来是“招致”的意思，顿觉原作者的霸气啊！最后优秀范例的on the basis of也是很令人汗颜，因为我们最经常写的也就是based on，而且还觉得很漂亮了，但是原来还有on the basis of这样的表达方式，真的是气煞周郎啊！
优秀的作文，一定是建立在多读优秀原文的基础上的！无老师作文巨讲堂，在2013年一定要更上一层楼啊！