无老师满分范例：The lecturer states that, although the commonly accepted three theories of birds' navigation sounds convincing, it suffers from several flaws on various grounds, as is presented below.
The first problem with the navigation theory presented in the text is the lack of substantial evidence. As is stated in the lecture, many birds could still navigate at night; therefore they could not navigate by using the sun as compass, since there is no sunlight at night for their reference. And stars do not help either, as there is only one bird species that is known to navigate by using stars. Therefore the sun and the star could not be birds' compasses.
无老师优秀中文翻译：听力文章说，虽然现在被普遍接受的关于鸟类导航的3个理论听起来是很可信的，但是在某些特定的情况下它还是有一些漏洞的，我将在下面列数这些问题。
第一个问题，阅读文章当中所列举的关于鸟类导航的理论缺少实质性的证据。就像听力文章所陈述的那样，很多鸟类在晚上也是可以飞行的；因此他们不会是使用太阳当做指南针来飞行的，因为显然在晚上是没有太阳的。星星其实也帮不上忙，因为只有一种鸟类知道怎么用星星来进行导航。因此，太阳和鸟类都不能作为鸟类的指南针。
无老师平庸范例：In the lecture, the 3 widely accepted theories of the navigation sounds right, but in some cases, there may be wrong, I will list them.
The theory about the bird’s navigation listed in the text lacks substantial evidence. On the contrary, birds can fly at night, so they would not use the sun to navigate as a compass, since the sun would sleep at night. The stars could not play any role either, because only one species could navigate by the stars. So, both the sun and the stars could not navigate the birds as a compass.
无老 师按：很多考友都来问综合作文到底该怎么写，这个月和下个月，无老师就拿一篇综合作文的满分文章来跟大家分析一下综合作文该怎么写。如果独立作文考的是文笔的话，综合作文考的就是听力，因为阅读文章都摆在那里了，何必再考你呢，因此，综合作文主要考察人的听力实力。本篇文章就是这样。
首先第一段：优秀范例：The lecturer states that, although the commonly accepted three theories of birds' navigation sounds convincing, it suffers from several flaws on various grounds, as is presented below.对比平庸范例：In the lecture, the 3 widely accepted theories of the navigation sounds right, but in some cases, there may be wrong, I will list them.其实前半部分差别不大，关键是后半部分优秀范例写得更华丽一点。优秀范例的it suffers from several flaws on various grounds, as is presented below.虽然是个模板，但是说实话，写的够华丽，直接KO平庸范例，各位考友可以在考试的时候，直接拿过去使用。
第二段一开始，直接列出阅读观点作为靶子。底下么，直接轰击之！优秀范例：The first problem with the navigation theory presented in the text is the lack of substantial evidence.平庸范例：The theory about the bird’s navigation listed in the text lacks substantial evidence.遣词造句来说，差别不大，唯一的差别也就是优秀范例用了lack这个单词的名词词性the lack of substantial evidence，而平庸范例很僵化的用了lack这个单词的动词本身。
第二句，优秀范例：As is stated in the lecture, many birds could still navigate at night; therefore they could not navigate by using the sun as compass, since there is no sunlight at night for their reference.对比平庸范例：On the contrary, birds can fly at night, so they would not use the sun to navigate as a compass, since the sun would sleep at night.不管是优秀范例的As is stated in the lecture,还是平庸范例的On the contrary,其实都是可接受的模板。接下来优秀范例用了navigate，而平庸范例继续想象力贫乏的用了fly，这是一点点差别。其他的差别就是，最后，无老师调皮了一下下，在平庸范例里写了“the sun would sleep at night”，你懂的。^_^
第三句，优秀范例：And stars do not help either, as there is only one bird species that is known to navigate by using stars.相比于平庸范例The stars could not play any role either, because only one species could navigate by the stars.好吧，无老师有些坐不住了，这个时候各位考友想必也看出来了，其实综合作文对于遣词造句的要求不是很高，因此优秀范例，几乎一直在用口语化的表达方法，因此无老师无奈把平庸范例做成了优秀范例，甩出了play any role，表示“没起到任何的作用”，不过优秀范例在最后良心发现，用处一招A is known “A被知道，被熟知”，稍微微的hold住了一点点场面，这里的is known不见得有多难，关键是增加了句式的多样化，这是最为可取的。
最后一句：优秀范例：Therefore the sun and the star could not be birds' compasses.对比平庸范例：So, both the sun and the stars could not navigate the birds as a compass.优秀范例的优点是be birds' compasses写得十分的简洁，平庸范例的优点是both A and B,中国学生有时想不到用。但是本身水平差距不大。
通过这2段各位考友就能看出，综合作文，听力取胜，词句不见得一定要多么的花哨，词可达意即可。至于很多考友所关心的，先写阅读的内容，还是先写听力的内容，其实根本不重要。
无老师优秀中文翻译：听力文章说，虽然现在被普遍接受的关于鸟类导航的3个理论听起来是很可信的，但是在某些特定的情况下它还是有一些漏洞的，我将在下面列数这些问题。
第一个问题，阅读文章当中所列举的关于鸟类导航的理论缺少实质性的证据。就像听力文章所陈述的那样，很多鸟类在晚上也是可以飞行的；因此他们不会是使用太阳当做指南针来飞行的，因为显然在晚上是没有太阳的。星星其实也帮不上忙，因为只有一种鸟类知道怎么用星星来进行导航。因此，太阳和鸟类都不能作为鸟类的指南针。
无老师平庸范例：In the lecture, the 3 widely accepted theories of the navigation sounds right, but in some cases, there may be wrong, I will list them.
The theory about the bird’s navigation listed in the text lacks substantial evidence. On the contrary, birds can fly at night, so they would not use the sun to navigate as a compass, since the sun would sleep at night. The stars could not play any role either, because only one species could navigate by the stars. So, both the sun and the stars could not navigate the birds as a compass.
无老 师按：很多考友都来问综合作文到底该怎么写，这个月和下个月，无老师就拿一篇综合作文的满分文章来跟大家分析一下综合作文该怎么写。如果独立作文考的是文笔的话，综合作文考的就是听力，因为阅读文章都摆在那里了，何必再考你呢，因此，综合作文主要考察人的听力实力。本篇文章就是这样。
首先第一段：优秀范例：The lecturer states that, although the commonly accepted three theories of birds' navigation sounds convincing, it suffers from several flaws on various grounds, as is presented below.对比平庸范例：In the lecture, the 3 widely accepted theories of the navigation sounds right, but in some cases, there may be wrong, I will list them.其实前半部分差别不大，关键是后半部分优秀范例写得更华丽一点。优秀范例的it suffers from several flaws on various grounds, as is presented below.虽然是个模板，但是说实话，写的够华丽，直接KO平庸范例，各位考友可以在考试的时候，直接拿过去使用。
第二段一开始，直接列出阅读观点作为靶子。底下么，直接轰击之！优秀范例：The first problem with the navigation theory presented in the text is the lack of substantial evidence.平庸范例：The theory about the bird’s navigation listed in the text lacks substantial evidence.遣词造句来说，差别不大，唯一的差别也就是优秀范例用了lack这个单词的名词词性the lack of substantial evidence，而平庸范例很僵化的用了lack这个单词的动词本身。
第二句，优秀范例：As is stated in the lecture, many birds could still navigate at night; therefore they could not navigate by using the sun as compass, since there is no sunlight at night for their reference.对比平庸范例：On the contrary, birds can fly at night, so they would not use the sun to navigate as a compass, since the sun would sleep at night.不管是优秀范例的As is stated in the lecture,还是平庸范例的On the contrary,其实都是可接受的模板。接下来优秀范例用了navigate，而平庸范例继续想象力贫乏的用了fly，这是一点点差别。其他的差别就是，最后，无老师调皮了一下下，在平庸范例里写了“the sun would sleep at night”，你懂的。^_^
第三句，优秀范例：And stars do not help either, as there is only one bird species that is known to navigate by using stars.相比于平庸范例The stars could not play any role either, because only one species could navigate by the stars.好吧，无老师有些坐不住了，这个时候各位考友想必也看出来了，其实综合作文对于遣词造句的要求不是很高，因此优秀范例，几乎一直在用口语化的表达方法，因此无老师无奈把平庸范例做成了优秀范例，甩出了play any role，表示“没起到任何的作用”，不过优秀范例在最后良心发现，用处一招A is known “A被知道，被熟知”，稍微微的hold住了一点点场面，这里的is known不见得有多难，关键是增加了句式的多样化，这是最为可取的。
最后一句：优秀范例：Therefore the sun and the star could not be birds' compasses.对比平庸范例：So, both the sun and the stars could not navigate the birds as a compass.优秀范例的优点是be birds' compasses写得十分的简洁，平庸范例的优点是both A and B,中国学生有时想不到用。但是本身水平差距不大。
通过这2段各位考友就能看出，综合作文，听力取胜，词句不见得一定要多么的花哨，词可达意即可。至于很多考友所关心的，先写阅读的内容，还是先写听力的内容，其实根本不重要。